Critiquez-moi et mettez-à jourmoi!

Well, I skipped my update me in an act of silent protest (protesting what, beats me), so I'm gonna do this now. I really really enjoy the visual communication project. I'm very happy with the work I've done so far and I can't wait to present my project to the class. I've chosen a very simple story - just a love triangle, really - and made it more intense and more of an intellectual drama rather than a stupid sappy romance. There's a lot of melodrama involved in the story, but that's intentional. There's also a lot of symbolism, especially surrounding Alexis's character Audrey. Symbols include her head scarf and her red coat.

And while I'm here, critique me?